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This was really cool! It could be cleaner, but the movements are on point and the colors you chose are super interesting. The animation has a lot of great energy, too...There's a lot of great stuff here.

This ain't bad actually. I just wish there was more of it...maybe a lil sound?

You should keep at it even if it gets blammed! It's a nice start of something.

Everything about this is fucking great.

Colors/Lights? Rad.
The action? RAD.
The smear frames? Rad.
The music? SO, SO RAD

I love this.

I think this is a pretty good first attempt. I liked the joke at end!

A few suggestions/comments are:
The beginning shot is a little long. The stick figure just walks across the screen—It's boring. I'd make that shot shorter or add something into the shot to make it less monotonous.

The audio for the car comes way too early.

I don't think the 6 sec credits are necessary on a piece this short. I'd just sign it in the corner.

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This had a solid set up—I hope you keep at it.

PrabsAnimation responds:

Thanks a lot, AchromaticHue. I will definitely work on the things you have mentioned and try to do better.

Just a technical note: Brian's voice is kind of quiet, esp in comparison to the other dog. it'd be worth it to go back and even that out a bit

....Why are you reuploading tho?

Yoshi-1up responds:

"HD" Remasters. They take days to fix, but it's worth it! People on Youtube stole my animations around 2008 and slapped their names over it and got millions of views. So hopefully this helps me. I already got tons of people saying "YOU MADE THAT?!". So that's a good sign lol

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